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What a captivating opening chapter! You've masterfully woven together Imogen's professional struggles with the fashion house, her creative fulfillment in designing for friends, and that delicious romantic backstory with Christian. The "twinge of envy" she feels watching Libby and Adrian perfectly captures her longing. And that ending - the reunion setup is chef's kiss! The way you built tension with her running late, only to have it culminate in that moment of recognition, is brilliantly executed. The contrast between her haute couture world and her desire to design something "real" for everyday people adds wonderful depth to her character. Can't wait to see how this unfolds!

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